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Valley Mobile
Valley Business MobileSection by section
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Keywords in title + subtitle
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13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Finance”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 385 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 121 characters.
1,146 characters.
Enough substance
212 characters.
6 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.18 average.
20,076 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
899 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 88 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes general improvements, enhancements, and bug fixes…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Feature enhancements and bug fixes”
3 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
116 MB.
Reasonable download size
39 MB.