Two listings, one rope
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Pure Sniper: Gun Shooter Games
First person Shooting 3-d: FPS
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Keywords in title + subtitle
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29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “FPS Shooting Game”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Gun Shooter Games”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Army Battle, Tanks & Soldiers”
Has a subtitle
“First person Shooting 3-d: FPS”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 433 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 161 characters.
3,380 characters.
Enough substance
3,682 characters.
8 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
37,984 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
234,548 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 53 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 38 days ago.
114 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
175 characters of release notes.
13 languages.
Localised listing
13 languages.
390 MB.
Reasonable download size
440 MB.